Design Principle/Project 2
17.02.25 - 07.03.25/ Week 3 - Week 5
Sara Patel/0362875
Design Principle/Bachelors of Design in Creative Media/Taylors University
Project 2
INSTRUCTIONS
TASK
In Task 2, we were asked to assess, investigate, document, and analyze the design principles of the artwork selected in Task 1, examining it we had to include a recap of the brief from the previous task, in 300- to 350-word visual analysis based on the notes given. Further we had to get three sketched improvement ideas with rationale for each, supported by visual references. We had to get weekly progress discussed with the lecturer and were required for regular feedback and approval.
"Fault Vision", Magdiel Lopez; 2024, A4, digital collage
http://www.magdiellopez.com/
I find this design very eye-catching as it has a creative and
attractive merge of vibrant colors with different shaped elements and an
imaginary idea. It has a futuristic and dreamlike feel that makes it
interesting to look at. Another thing that makes this design attractive
is the mix of textures and patterns. The faces are smooth, while the
floral patterns on their bodies add a unique design while the cactus and
mountains give the image more depth.
The artwork also has a strong sense of mystery as the glasses reflect
light, hiding the person's eyes, which makes them look futuristic or
anonymous. The way their bodies blend with the illustrated landscape
symbolize a connection between humans and nature.
Overall, this artwork is exciting to look at because it combines
different elements in a creative way. It blends technology with nature,
realism with abstraction, and bright colors with deep meaning. The
balance of colors, the unique composition, and the mystery behind the
image make it a very interesting and beautiful design.
Phase 1: Observation
At first glance, this artwork feels dreamlike and surreal. It features
two people a man and a woman standing back-to-back, their faces blending
into each other through a smooth gradient of warm and cool colors. Their
glasses are completely white, almost as if they are blocking out their
eyes, which gives a sense of mystery or detachment. Behind them, the
background showcases a desert landscape with towering cacti, a sky that
shifts from warm peach to deep blue, and two glowing celestial bodies
resembling the sun or moon. The lower part of the artwork transforms
into a silhouette of mountains and more cacti, adding depth. Scattered
across the piece are abstract elements like circular floral patterns,
thin white and orange lines, and star-like symbols. There is also some
small, subtle text in the lower right corner, blending into the
scene.
Phase 2: Analysis
This artwork is carefully structured to guide the viewer’s eye. The two
figures serve as the main focal point, positioned centrally to create
balance. Their color contrast one leaning towards warm orange tones, the
other towards cool blues suggests a sense of duality, perhaps opposites
or two sides of the same person. The background, with its desert setting
and large celestial elements, adds to the surreal and cinematic feel.
The use of double exposure, where elements fade into each other, makes
the entire composition feel fluid and seamless. The circular floral
patterns subtly echo the shape of the glowing suns, creating repetition
and unity. The small text at the bottom blends in softly, making it feel
more like a whisper rather than a dominant part of the design.
Phase 3: Interpretation
This piece seems to explore themes of identity, connection, and
transformation. The way the two figures blend into each other could
symbolize shared experiences, unity, or even a sense of losing oneself
in another. The absence of visible eyes might suggest introspection,
anonymity, or seeing the world differently. The desert landscape often
represents solitude, self-discovery, or resilience, reinforcing the
reflective nature of the artwork. The dreamlike colors and abstract
shapes make it feel otherworldly, as if the figures exist in a space
between reality and imagination. Overall, the piece evokes a deep sense
of emotion perhaps longing, reflection , or personal evolution leaving
room for the viewer to find their own meaning in it.
IMPROVEMENTS
SKETCH 1
Rationale: Firstly i have removed the background on the design so
that the image is more emphasized of the portraits. I also changed the
element inside the portrait to represent how nature calms down one. I have
uses different shades of green in this sketch to create a calm but
mysterious mood. The double exposure effect combining the figures and
nature helps us understand the importance of nature in our life and also
how we all unite under nature. The glowing glasses make it seem like they
are deep in thought, looking at something only they can see. The landscape
inside their bodies represents emotions, memories, or hidden thoughts that
only they know of. The bright moon in the background contrasts with the
darker parts, making the image more deep and thoughtful.
SKETCH 2
Rationale: I have removed background for this design too to
emphasis on the portrait but this sketch work adds more colors,
patterns, and background details. The desert, cacti, and flowers bring a
symbolic meaning—growth, loneliness, and strength. The sketchy faces in
the background suggest different personalities or hidden identities. The
text, "Who Am I When No One’s Watching?", makes the viewer think about
who they really are when alone. The mix of warm and cool colors inside
the figures shows an internal struggle, making this design more
emotional and layered.
SKETCH 3
Rationale: I have emphasized on the figure for this sketch too, but
this final design sketch is more colorful and energetic as it gives a
very hypnotizing movement effect in the background. The wavy background
gives a feeling of changes. The bright and glowing colors inside the
figures make them look surreal and dreamlike. The desert, cacti, and
patterns are still there, but now they feel even more expressive. This
version represents the journey of discovering yourself without limits or
expectations.
FEEDBACKS
WEEK 3: We finalized Task 1 and began sketching ideas for
Task 2 to consult on our progress. I sketched out 2 rough
design ideas and got them reviewed, while Mr. Fauzi helped me
develop the third idea and suggested me critical changes to
improve my other 2 sketches. He also clarified my confusion
about the assignment requirements and guided me on how to
proceed.
WEEK 4: I started digitalizing the rough sketches because
they were difficult to understand and too clumpy, which I
didn’t want to submit. So, I created much more refined
sketches using Photoshop. I got my 3 designs reviewed, and Sir
selected one of them. He also suggested a few changes to
enhance its meaning and make it more visually appealing for
the final submission.
WEEK 5: I implemented the previous feedback and finalized my
design for the final submission.
REFLECTION
This project was really interesting as it helped me improve
my ability to analyze visual elements and apply design
principles effectively. By studying the specific artwork in
detail, I learned how to observe minor things more critically.
Further sketching out ideas for improving the existing design
pushed me to think creatively about enhancing a design.
However, I faced some challenges on the way, such as come up
with sketch ideas which looked more attractive creatively and
also had meaning behind it, also finding relevant visual
references and avoiding unintentional similarities was really
tricky. The weekly feedbacks from my tutor helped me
understand my strengths and areas for improvement, especially
in sketching out new design. Overall, this task deepened my
appreciation for visual design and strengthened my ability to
express my ideas clearly.
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